The line graph gives information the average price each month payments for 4 mobile phone companies in a specific country in Europe over the period of 9 month in 2022. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the average cost for Domo, Lex, Alpha surged significantly by contract Sim TX plunged relatively over the period shown. In addiction, the Alpha's monthly price was the cheapest at the beginning. However, it went up dramatically and become the most expensive brand. In January, every customer have to pay 15 euro to be able to use Domo, the highest fee. While the bills for Alpha company was the lowest with only 5 euro. There was a relative stability in the price of Alpha company during the first 5 month before a jump to 25 euro. In September which made alpha the most expensive kind of mobile contract. After having to pay the highest price, most of the time mentioned Domo use witness slight decrease to about 23 euro by September which branch after Alpha. Lex starting about 12 euro in January, Lex was the second most expensive company in comparison with the other three. There was an soar in the monthly cost to 18 euro in September. Despite a significant fluctuate during the same period. During the first 6 month, the Sim TX grow up after that it reduced to about 8 euro in the last month of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The line graph gives information the ave...
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Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... country in Europe over the period of 9 month in 2022. Overall, it can be clearly see...
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Line 1, column 522, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... January, every customer have to pay 15 euro to be able to use Domo, the highest fee...
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Line 1, column 629, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...lpha company was the lowest with only 5 euro. There was a relative stability in the ...
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Line 1, column 715, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ice of Alpha company during the first 5 month before a jump to 25 euro. In September ...
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Line 1, column 741, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...g the first 5 month before a jump to 25 euro. In September which made alpha the most...
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Line 1, column 932, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...use witness slight decrease to about 23 euro by September which branch after Alpha. ...
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Line 1, column 998, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...anch after Alpha. Lex starting about 12 euro in January, Lex was the second most exp...
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Line 1, column 1103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...parison with the other three. There was an soar in the monthly cost to 18 euro in ...
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Line 1, column 1137, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...e was an soar in the monthly cost to 18 euro in September. Despite a significant flu...
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Line 1, column 1231, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ing the same period. During the first 6 month, the Sim TX grow up after that it reduc...
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Line 1, column 1290, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...row up after that it reduced to about 8 euro in the last month of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55696202532 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40996613301 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5753286804 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0769230769 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183705053075 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701752240126 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642173465686 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183705053075 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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