The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities
The amount of median time devoted to variegated deeds on each day by both UK genders is collated in the table.
Overall, both genders waste the majority of the time during a day to sleep and there is the opposition completely between men and women on housekeeping and child-rearing.
Interestingly, around one-third day is exploited to sleep by boy (8.04 hours) and girl (8.18 hours) per day. Subsequently, the second priority act is recreation which both sexes fascinated and especially in watching TV, listening to music and contributing to social intercourse.
Moreover, men labor and study for an average of 79 minutes longer than women day by day. On the contrary, women have further involvement in household works and look after children than men, approximately double the amount of time which latter consecrate 3.32 hours compared with former just furnish 1.56 hours in total.
- The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. 89
- Discussion the reason why people define happiness differently and how to obtain happiness 57
- The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities 56
- The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, second, so, third, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14583333333 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92240671946 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2964389068 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.081467962924 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397342000359 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302462965549 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434772339866 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300042457071 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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