The bar chart provides detailed information about how many hours a day men and women who get married in two different age group have to work in a company. Looking more closely at the graph, it is obvious from the data that the number of men's working hours is more than that of women, but it is the opposite in total working hours.
With ages between 24 and 44 years, the working duration of husbands in a company at 7 hours is higher than wives' by approximately 1.5 hours per day. Women, however, have twice as the hours of unpaid work at home as their husbands. As a result, the sum of these two working hours of wives is 2 hours higher than that of husbands.
The pattern of hours spending in work above aged 45 years is the same as the younger group's. The hours worked in paid job by men are more than women's, while housework is more done by wives at 1 and 2 hours respectively. It is interesting to note that the number of females' total hours between the two age groups is the same at 11 hours a day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21134020619 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27875282169 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9957154297 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.125 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235598703438 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121221883634 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427181673304 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180089535707 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362033248646 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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