The pie chart represents the type of energy production in France for two years 1995 and 2005.
As the diagram illustrates, the energy production of France is mainly generated from four sources, namely Coal, Gas, Petro and Nuclear, rest of the energy is produced by other means.
In 1995, three major sources consisted the energy production of the country by almost 30 percent. To be more precise, the first place belongs to coal with 29.80 percent share, followed by gas and petro, respectively with 29.63 and 29027 percentages. In addition, 6.4 percent of the energy is generated from nuclear power, and the remaining 4.9 percent is resulted from different sources.
While in 2005, the coal and gas energies kept their proportions and ranks nearly constant at 30.93 and 30.31 percent, by a slight increase, the share of petro energy is reduced to 19.55 percent which led to a rise in other energy forms. So that the nuclear power grew to 10.10 percent and other kinds of energy comprised a share of 9.10 percent, although all energy forms maintained their previous ranks, despite small alternations in their percentages.
- Some people prefer to a live in house while others feel that there are more advantages to live in apartment Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house comparing with living in an apartment 78
- Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- We are increasingly becoming dependent on computers They are used in business hospitals crime detection and even to fly planes What things will they be used in the future Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of 78
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- Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04812834225 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55522100686 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.345965404 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.857142857 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24027043477 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132980563156 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103553927736 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182913297636 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101415088452 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.