The chart below shows the different type of goods and services purchased online in Australia Canada and the United Kingdom last year

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The chart below shows the different type of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada, and the United Kingdom last year.

The proportion of total consumers buying several kinds of items and services in three countries namely Australia, Canada, and the United Kingdom the previous year is demonstrated in this bar chart.
Overall, in terms of each particular category, the proportion of total buyers purchasing items, ranked in ascending order are usually as follows: the United Kingdom, Australia, and Canada.
It is of note that online music purchase in the UK accounted for the highest proportion among the three countries, with approximately 65 percent, meanwhile, Australia’s figure was 20 percent less than the former's number. Regarding Canada’s highest online market share category compared with that sector in others, it was the toys sector that accounts for 25 percent of total domestic buyers. Surprisingly, buying toys online seems to be out of the ordinary since the percentage of this sector in the UK was the lowest figures in comparison with other countries’ number as well as other sectors in the UK, at 2 percent.
As regards Australia, books and computer equipment were the most popular items buying online, since both categories made up for over 45 percent. Interestingly, the rate of book purchase over total purchaser in Canada was exactly equal to the aforementioned percentage in Australia.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'toys'' or 'toy's'?
Suggestion: toys'; toy's
... with that sector in others, it was the toys sector that accounts for 25 percent of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, well, while, as regards, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3512195122 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89997435834 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.978038456 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.714285714 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213414647798 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109811347902 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783756176669 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152752838741 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664611541641 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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