The chart below shows the estimated sales nationally of silver goods in 000s of units for two companies next year The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in silver goods at the end of next year Write a report for a university l

The bar and pie chart predict the estimated sales of silver goods in units for the two companies and their forecasted market share for the next year respectively.

At a glance, it is observed that striking factor being trend of projected overall enhancement in expected sales of silver goods next year. On the statistical analysis, 150,000 units will be sold by Meteor products Ltd in January. Almost, 100,000 units of Meteor products Ltd will be estimated in the following month. After that, the sale of Meteor products Ltd will be increased till July. Moreover, 500,000 units of Meteor products will not be changed in September to November. 600,000 units of Meteor products Ltd likely in December. The Mark Jones Ltd will start sale 450,000 units in January. Mark Jones Ltd sale expected half in next month. After that Mark Jones Ltd will gradually rise till June. 900,000 units Mark Jones sale projected in end of the year.

According to pie chart half of the proportion of market share will be shared by other countries. 30 percent share will be estimated to share by Mark Jones Ltd which will be 10 percent more than Meteor products Ltd.

In the nutshell, there will be major dominance of Mark Jones Ltd than Meteor products Ltd.

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Average: 8.1 (8 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s Ltd sale expected half in next month. After that Mark Jones Ltd will gradually rise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8679245283 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38158504199 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457547169811 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0802565006 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7142857143 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 5.23603664747 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237070145024 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112821275768 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144703482169 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204901978277 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218668255817 0.0819641961636 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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