Music is a natural phenomena. Music becomes a part and parcel in today's world. There are innumerable effects of music on individuals and society. Music is a source of entertainment of individuals and society.
As every cloud has silver lining. Music is an elixir of life. Music tells us about culture and tradition of country. Whereas, music gives relaxation to everyone. It is a way to express fellings and happiness. Music helps to hell depression. Moreover, music gives break from hectic schedule. Music is a part of human from cradle to grave. Music brings positivity as well as motivational music helps to achieve success. Besides this, music can be enjoyed in any form. Music is played at every occasion such as marriages, birthday parties and some other functions. While, people can earn name and fame in society if they have Melodious voice.
On the other hand, music has also some negative effects on individuals and society. High volume music leads to more noise pollution and leads to more accidents as well as music also disturbs peaceful environment of society. whereas, it is a source of distraction. People become more introvert if they listen alots of music. Music also effects on hearing impactment.
In this epilogue, music is a divine gift of nature. Music bridges the gap between countries through concerts and helps to maintain harmony. Everyone has its own choice of music. In this modern era, music becomes more important.
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- The chart below shows the estimated sales nationally of silver goods in 000s of units for two companies next year The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in silver goods at the end of next year Write a report for a university l 81
- The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in differnt countries in 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisos where relevant. 67
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- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'phenomenon'?
Suggestion: phenomenon
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tainment of individuals and society. As every cloud has silver lining. Music is...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...about culture and tradition of country. Whereas, music gives relaxation to everyone. It...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
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Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sturbs peaceful environment of society. whereas, it is a source of distraction. People ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65593870725 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.833074719 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.6 106.682146367 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.6 20.7667163134 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.72 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408598895591 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131230167686 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571236258625 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264992773331 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679159553982 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.59 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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