The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. ( pounds sterling)
The Rendered vertical bar graph illustrated a vivid picture the expenditure of money on daily necessity goods by UK and France during the year 2010.
A cursory glance at the given chart is adequate to seen that the promotion of the United Kingdom 450,000 pounds sterling had spend on cars, which was the highest figure on the chart. While, perfume atleast 140,000 pounds sterling, it was the lowest data. By the France expenditure more money approximately 360,000 pounds on computer also experienced as a increased this figure in 2010 from United Kingdom (350,000) to France ( 390,000 pounds sterling).
As further scrutiny reveals, the figure of cameras had fallen significantly of both nation at 350,000 and 150,000 pounds sterling respectively as compared to others sources. Moreover, the united Kingdom was lower than this at 400,000 ponds sterling but it was still a little higher than figure of books of france about 300,000pounds sterling.
From the overall analysis, it is manifested that in the provided time- period the spend pounds greatest on consumer goods by United Kingdom and France in the year 2010 .However, across the year, the pattern of things differ before and after under the five categories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ted Kingdom 450,000 pounds sterling had spend on cars, which was the highest figure o...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ted Kingdom 450,000 pounds sterling had spend on cars, which was the highest figure o...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... pounds on computer also experienced as a increased this figure in 2010 from Unit...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...10 from United Kingdom 350,000 to France 390,000 pounds sterling. As further s...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ested that in the provided time- period the spend pounds greatest on consumer goods by Un...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'pounds the greatest'.
Suggestion: pounds the greatest
... in the provided time- period the spend pounds greatest on consumer goods by United Kingdom and...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ited Kingdom and France in the year 2010 .However, across the year, the pattern of...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ed Kingdom and France in the year 2010 .However, across the year, the pattern of things...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22335025381 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60082818508 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9304162409 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196409839345 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942825502764 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407605296555 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119492147292 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360584478113 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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