The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparsions where relevant.
The bar graph reveals about representation the information GDP upsurge per year.It has given three nations between 2007 to 2010.
According to the bar chart,it is clearly seen that in 2007 tunisia had higher proportion in the chart as well as anyone countries like 6 each half.Therefore,in 2008 to 2010 tunisia was decline year by year.
Form the other side, in 2007 japan had very lowest percentage but also in 2008 japan was climb up 4 proportion all in all in 2009 was near rose percentage 5.After that,in 2010 japan had fallen up proportion on the
chart.Moreover,in 2007 ecudor was plummet ratio 2 percentage as far as after year ecudor was rocket 4 percentage.Lastly in 2009 to 2010 ecudor was sumilar percentage.
To sum up, in begin japan had very fall down proportion consists japan was growth up in 2010.Thus,Tunisia had started very well down than after years climbed up day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93464052288 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09635651056 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.1418223251 43.030603864 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.75 112.824112599 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.25 5.23603664747 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158734965346 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126649940318 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804862269456 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109478835494 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806137293688 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.2329268293 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.