The graph below shows the acid level in mouth from consumption of sugar and honey.Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth,which can cause tooth decay.(High acid levels are neasured by low PH values).
The liner chart reveal that informantion about acid level in mouth from consumption of sugar sweets.It is give three categories like fruit sugar,Cane sugar, Honey.
It is clearly seen that cane sugar has similar for any minutes.After that, cane sugar straight line in anytime in the chart.Therefore,fruit suger is start to decline in 5 minutes through ten minutes left fruit sugar has lit upsurge acidity.Otherwise, in 25 minutes has near up fruit sugar instead of in 35
and 40 minutes have highest proportion at that moment.
On the other hand, in start honey is near rise to fruit sugar but also honey have fall up for any minutes and any time.lastly, honey in 20 to 25 minutes has increase acidity percentage for the chart.Thus,fruit sugar and cane last equal minutes.
To sum up, in this chart cane sugar has same ratio to all minutes.Then,
fruit sugar and honey have last time similar minutes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eft fruit sugar has lit upsurge acidity.Otherwise, in 25 minutes has near up fruit sugar ...
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...sugar instead of in 35 and 40 minutes have highest proportion at that moment. On the ot...
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...in 20 to 25 minutes has increase acidity percentage for the chart.Thus,fruit suga...
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...rease acidity percentage for the chart.Thus,fruit sugar and cane last equal minutes...
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...ane sugar has same ratio to all minutes.Then, fruit sugar and honey have last time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, so, then, therefore, thus, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97385620915 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06875099809 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5676542702 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.25 112.824112599 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.5 5.23603664747 353% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159912993345 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128343266315 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107482601238 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918841365031 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102796963364 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.2329268293 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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