Many of the medical that people are experiencing in today 's world are due to the fact that we have very sedentary lifestyle?
It is true that today medical issues is so basic thing in all world through most of adolescent like the lazy lifestyle.There are plethora reasons behind it.This essay would throw some light an all aspect to see things in the right way.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant a couple of week youngster have liking of sedentary life in their life.After that,they always time online
on social sites.For instancesFacebook,
Snapchat,Twitter,Whatsapp and so on.Otherwise,
they has plenty time killing on Internet as well as they could not awareness about study.Furthermore,they would not interest any participation like out game, function,party,
study and extra.
Nevertheless,there are no denying that fact the,juvenile never interact for everybody as far as they always like extrovert himself.In fact,kids should not communication for one to other dweller.In addition,teenager always playing indoor games.For example,there are causing umpteen disease like depression,
anxiety,blood pressure,heart,obesity,
carbonic so on.Last but not the least,in my mind,teenager do exercise in whole life.They will be not create medical issue in our life instead of they must avoid lazy lifestyle all in all they should good impact of us.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand it is no doubt in few days person have like sedentary lifestyle.on other hand,they are facing a lot of problem in their life.In my point of view,youth can do physical activities.Thus,they will superb
influences of health.
- some people think that government should spend money on faster means of transport.other think that government should spend money on other things like city and environment m.Discuss both views and give your own opinion? 56
- obesity was once considered a disease of adults,however,it is becoming increasingly common among children.Why do you think is happening?what can be done to help children stay healthy? 56
- Some people think that government should spend money on faster means of transport other think that government spend money on other thinks like city and environment.Discuss both view and give your own opinion? 56
- These days more fathers stay at home & take care of their children.while mothers go out to work.Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 67
- some people belive that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters(such as food ,clothes,entertainment )is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.Other people believe that it is important fo 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in fact, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68558951965 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98486869362 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676855895197 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.119160373 49.4020404114 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.5 106.682146367 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.25 20.7667163134 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.75 7.06120827912 506% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801685478413 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503261239855 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0143553697701 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0256156392775 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271744238315 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 13.0946893788 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.22 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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