Prison is the common way is most countries to solve the problem of crime .However,a more effective is to provide people with a better education .Agree or disagree?
In these days technology is very fast .There are basic need in human being life.In addition dozen has easily solved all the crime in any nation rather than they can use on internet and appear who have uniyielding this city /countries .Education plays a vital role in our life.There are manifold reasons.This essay throw some light an all aspects to the see in right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant gone on the days now adolescent must reliase it Co- education is umpteen imperative part of life.Hence civilization have good collection in their life .Otherwise society would respect and give the honour but also they have educated person than they have best collected .
For instance , they must well education , personality development in all in superb communication skills .
Moreover,they should brilliant talk way one to other citizens.
Nevertheless,there are no dying some off springs ponder that people can believe himself more than they must be finish all the crime in any everywhere.For example,human trafficking racket,rape, murder, new bady borns can abortion in the stones and so on.In my mind person must education in their life through we would control all the terrified crimes.However,todays
technology is very common using in anywhere as well as there can contract whole the nation.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand,I would like to give some suggestion in this regard.government have given good education system as far as a lot of facilities provide the globalization.On the other hand some people trust that all countries individual can good education in their life If crime have totally finished in whole life.
- with the development of technology and science,some people believe that there is no great value of artists such as musicians and painters.What are the things can do but the scientist cannot ?why art should be encouraged more? 56
- some people think that the teenage years are the happiness times of most people 's lives.Others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion? 84
- Consumer goods have become the most important part of people 's live.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage? 67
- The society would benefit from ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful benefits and even damaging .do u agree or disagree? 61
- some companies have uniform for their staff which must be worn at all what are the advantage for a company of having a uniform? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30223880597 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21120502221 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64552238806 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.131453823 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.833333333 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6666666667 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 7.06120827912 340% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133844804411 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657354492138 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257401311052 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607713063657 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242714499741 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 13.0946893788 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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