The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different citid s between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different citid s between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The bar graph illustrates the differences of average house prices in five cities between 1990----1995, compared with the figure in 1989.

According to the first stage, it is clearly to see that only the percentages of average house prices in Madrid and Frankfurt are above 0, which are about 2% and 3% respectively. While 3 cities average house prices experienced a downward trend, the most distinct change was the figure of Tokyo(down about 7.5%),followed by that of London and New York(approximately 7% and 5% respectively).

In the second stage between 1996----2002, there was only one city that the percentage of average house prices compared with 1989 below 0, which was about 5. What’s more, four cities figure of changes increased, and the most dramatic rise was observed in London, which rose by more than 10% . For the other 3 cities(New York, Madrid and Frankfurt), the percentage changes from 1989prices were no more than 5%.

All in all, most cities’ house prices experienced a decline in the first 5 years from 1990 to 1995, whereas in the next 6 years from 1996 to 2002, the prices got improved.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d in London, which rose by more than 10% . For the other 3 citiesNew York, Madrid ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01069518717 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92409539199 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7189051011 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413046126957 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212590168096 0.103423049105 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155009085354 0.0843802449381 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283590802442 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115439748783 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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