The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five Different cities between 1980 and 2002 compared with it the average house prices in 1989.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph, illustrates information regarding changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002, and its comparison with house prices in 1989. Overall, house prices increased in all cities during time with the exception of Frankfurt.
To begin with, during 1990 and 9 to 1995 residential prices in New York, London and Tokyo went down about 5% and 7% respectively. Whereas, Madrid and Frankfurt short positive growth of 2 and 3% as compared to 1989 prices.
During the next Era ranging from 1996 to 2002 prices in London change dramatically with the rise to 12 percent as compared to 1989 prices, which was the greatest increase among all cities. Similarly, in New York house prices went to 5 percent from - 5 percent.On the other hand, Madrid showed growth of 3 percent, while in frankford prices declined a little to 2 percent. Tokyo also showed positive trend and prices went from - 7 percent to - 5 percent, but still remained in the negative balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: except; except for
...ces increased in all cities during time with the exception of Frankfurt. To begin with, during 199...
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Suggestion: On
...ices went to 5 percent from - 5 percent.On the other hand, Madrid showed growth of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e trend and prices went from - 7 percent to - 5 percent, but still remained in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, similarly, so, still, whereas, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93413173653 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61578916222 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6227172233 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.714285714 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 5.23603664747 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334524848729 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163227726869 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143652667557 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243933676576 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160315719601 0.0819641961636 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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