The bar chart illustrates information about the difficulties that people living abroad have to confront according to their age. Overall, the main problems when they live overseas are finding friends, accommodation and learning local language.
The greatest problem for young people from 18 to 24 year olds is making friends which experienced by over 45 percent of people in this age group. While only 35 percent of people aged 35-54 and about 23 percent of people over 55 year olds have this problem.
Learning local language is the most problematic for 54 percent of oldest age group, whereas the youngest age group finds that easier, this is showed by a lower percentage at 29 percent. On the contrary, senior people have the least difficulty with searching for housing with only 22 percent.
In conclusion, all age group suffer the same problems when they live in other countries. But the percentage of foreign language of over 55 year olds group is much higher than others.
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- The increase in tourism is causing environmental problems. What problems has tourism brought to the environment? What can be done to solve these problems? 89
- The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008. 78
- The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary. 84
- The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feathers, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the oldest'.
Suggestion: of the oldest
... is the most problematic for 54 percent of oldest age group, whereas the youngest age gro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01829268293 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55250486438 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5949214393 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217452995668 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109295553431 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799849273764 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146128308054 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892230189979 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.