The chart below shows the number of hidden costs of the UK's annual food bill.p
Write a repost for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The pie chart provides the percentage of latent costs of products in UK per year.
There are five causes of hidden cost of food. First of all, the bigger part of the chart consists more than one quarter, to wit 36,2% and it illustrates the government subsidies for environmental costs. Next section is addition cost for domestic road transport, from farm to shop and the percentage is nearly a third. third fraction is almost a quarter and it is purpose agricultural pesticides or for example, pollution control. Next to the last one part shows a small minority of the whole chart and it takes the cost for shopping transport as delivery system from shop to home. Leftover and an insignificantly minority section provides international transport as air and see, as well as waste disposal and consists not even 1%.
To summarise, hidden cost takes many different needs but the most significant is for government granting and the lowest one represents the air and see transport.
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... system from shop to home. Leftover and an insignificantly minority section provides international transpor...
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...te disposal and consists not even 1%. To summarise, hidden cost takes many dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, third, well, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94545454545 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83017973906 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6892669225 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158870206518 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785386346566 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513754593187 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108842640383 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195237591984 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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