The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1928 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1928 and 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Submitted by farlotfi on Fri, 08/30/2019 - 11:28

Given is a bar chart indicating the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales over a 93-year period commencing from 1918. From data provided, it is apparent that at the first point, the majority of households lived in rented houses. A decline and growth, nonetheless, had happened in the percentage of renters and owners respectively over the period mentioned, through which owners led the way.

A more detailed look at the information reveals that just above 20 percent of households had their own landed property in 1918. During approximately a half century, the percentage of owners had witnessed a climb, overlapping households living in rented houses in 1971. Since then, in terms of the percentage of owners, a consistent rise had continued until reaching its peak at somewhere in the vicinity of 70% in 2001. Meanwhile, the column concerning the percentage of renters was in its lowest point at this year. Since 2001, during a decade a slight alteration had occurred, culminating in 65 percent for owners and 35 percent for renters, ultimately.

Overall, whilst most of households lived in rented houses at the beginning, the situation had changed over the time, leading to owners to outnumber renters and make the majority of households.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the households') or simply say ''most households''.
Suggestion: most of the households; most households
...nters, ultimately. Overall, whilst most of households lived in rented houses at the beginning...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, nonetheless, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20574162679 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93000384067 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555023923445 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0723767011 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.888888889 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155921025554 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711785677548 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687151254614 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110988521702 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460473758203 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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