The figure denotes the proportion of household in owned and rented in two European countries among 1918 to 2011.the survey have done in Wales and England.
In an overview we can observe that rented households witnessed a down word trend during one hundred years ,whereas household in owned experienced a up word trend .They reached same level in the year1971.
First of all ,the discrepancy between rented accommodation and owned one is too appreciable
During the first year ,It is up to 80% for rented house while it is near one-quarter for owned one.
On the other hand , it has an opposite situation in 2011 . The proportion of household in owned is approximately 63% whilst it is less than 40% for rented accommodation. The two bar graphs owned the half of the proportion in1971 but the household in owned accommodation exceed than the other one in 1981 ,in other word ,its rank was exactly60% for owned accommodation but it was 40% for rented one.
All in all , the most peak for household in rented accommodation was just less than 80 percent in 1981 and the top rate for owned accommodation was about 70 percent in 2001.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...down word trend during one hundred years ,whereas household in owned experienced a...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...,whereas household in owned experienced a up word trend .They reached same level ...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...old in owned experienced a up word trend .They reached same level in the year1971....
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Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...d in owned experienced a up word trend .They reached same level in the year1971. Fi...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ame level in the year1971. First of all ,the discrepancy between rented accommoda...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s too appreciable During the first year ,It is up to 80% for rented house while i...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uarter for owned one. On the other hand , it has an opposite situation in 2011 . ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d , it has an opposite situation in 2011 . The proportion of household in owned is...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dation exceed than the other one in 1981 ,in other word ,its rank was exactly60% f...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...han the other one in 1981 ,in other word ,its rank was exactly60% for owned accomm...
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Line 6, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t it was 40% for rented one. All in all , the most peak for household in rented a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, whereas, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79081632653 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82609598469 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525510204082 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2552546124 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205907748105 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109895190037 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471314953262 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121300249822 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523796094212 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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