The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The presented diagram illustrates percentages of owned and rented England Welsh accomdation from 1918 to 2011.Overall,owning and renting showed opposite trends with a sharp increase in ownership and overtaken renting by a wide margin.
In 1918, household ownership stood at around 23% compared to rentals,which were at nearly 80%.From that point there was a steady rise in ownership and decline in rentals.Rentals reached 69% in 1939 and held until 1953 before falling to 59% in 1961.Ownership rose to 31% in 1939,remained there in 1953 before becoming even with rentals at 50% each in 1971.
This trend continued for both percentages with rentals declining sharply to 40% and 31% in 1981 and 1991,respectively.likewise,ownership rose to 60% and 69% in the same years.In 2001, the falling rate of rentals slackened to 31% (69% for the ownership) and there was a small rebound that bucked the trend at the end of period with rented houses rising to nearly 40% and owned house dipping to just over 60%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... stood at around 23% compared to rentals,which were at nearly 80%.From that point ther...
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...red to rentals,which were at nearly 80%.From that point there was a steady rise in o...
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Suggestion: Rentals
...ise in ownership and decline in rentals.Rentals reached 69% in 1939 and held until 1953...
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Suggestion: Ownership
...ntil 1953 before falling to 59% in 1961.Ownership rose to 31% in 1939,remained there in 1...
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...% in 1981 and 1991,respectively.likewise,ownership rose to 60% and 69% in the same years.I...
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...p rose to 60% and 69% in the same years.In 2001, the falling rate of rentals slack...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11585365854 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.80305518405 2.65546596893 143% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7882689271 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 279.666666667 112.824112599 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.6666666667 22.9334400587 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173336311837 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145053749091 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128662104246 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145053749091 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128662104246 0.0819641961636 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.0 13.2329268293 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.59 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.3012195122 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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