The chart below shows the percentage of population aged 65 and over in three countries in 1980, 2000 and predicted percentage in 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart highlighted the proportion of the elderly population in 1980, 2000 and the estimated percentage by 2030 in three countries, namely Canada, Germany, and the UK.
A glance at the period shown, there was an upward trend in the number of older people during the time. While Canada is predicted to have the fastest growth in the figure of old ages, Britain will be the slowest of the three.
In 1980, the proportion of people aged 65 and over in Canada, Germany and the UK accounted for 15%, 13% and 10% respectively. Twenty years later, Germany, as well as Canada both, witnessed an increase of 5 more percent whereas the UK rose just slightly 2%, which was equal to Canada. By 2030, Germany, with accounting for 25% of the population, will still have the utmost growth of the elderly. Canadian population, following, will rocket to nearly 23% and overtake Britain, which is expected to attain17% of older people.
Overall, Germany forecasts to have the most elderly and the UK will retain the least of all.
- Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- The chart below shows the percentage of population aged 65 and over in three countries in 1980 2000 and predicted percentage in 2030 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site 61
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- Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
still, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77966101695 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52503820412 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.45799236 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.75 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120982553126 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536611731893 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776512231496 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825406777134 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899976640219 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.