Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is said that the innovation of technology has created a certain significant breakthrough in the retail industry. However, others hold the thought that this development has not prompted such changes. In my opinion, modern technology has boosted shopping experiences to a new level and benefited not only customers but also retailers domestically as well as internationally.
On the one hand, the fact that shopping now can be just a touch of a finger has some downsides. Firstly, it triggers human spending habits and has driven some of them into debt. With the evolution of AI and advertising, websites can keep track of which products their customers are searching for and offer them exactly what they want with a load of choices of different models and prices. It takes away people's time and even causes some into debt. Second, technology has resulted in a new wave of fraud in online shopping. Consumers are facing the risk of losing privacy as well as the details in their credit card and bank account. Crammers can create fake retail websites in order to steal customers personal information and their credit card detail.
On the other hand, technology has taken ease off from both customers and retailers worldwide. Instead of getting through traffic congestion, finding a parking lot, and surrounded by noisy and crowded people, consumers can order and receive as soon as possible whatever they want just by sitting comfortably at home and browsing websites. They can compare the prices from many platforms around the world and reading reviews on the product. Moreover, for those who want to enjoy outdoor shopping, they can save a lot of time by checking the store’s online website whether the product they want is available or not. For retailers, they can startup right on e-commerce platforms without worrying too much about renting fees for brick-and-mortar stores. Furthermore, during pandemics, technology help keep the business going.
In conclusion, although technology has exceeded some problems in our life, people need to understand this inevitable development and adapt to it. Looking at the bright side, technology has benefited the shopping industry is far more than expected with the convenient, stress-free, and saving time that it has brought. Therefore, in the future, consumers and retailers should learn to take full advantage of this evolution.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22193211488 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82081020075 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592689295039 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9220647669 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.263157895 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26315789474 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125341164471 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04098708075 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426851797505 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829878180412 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329380504227 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22193211488 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82081020075 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592689295039 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9220647669 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.263157895 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26315789474 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125341164471 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04098708075 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426851797505 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829878180412 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329380504227 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.