The chart below shows the percentage of total US population aged 65 and over between 1900 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of 3 different age groups of American elders who were above 65 years old in a century
Overall, the population in the US was getting older throughout the period, when there were increases in the population of elderly people until the final year. While people from 65 to 74 dominated the population age 65 and over as the crowdest, the percentage of people who were over 85 was much lower.
In 1990, elders aged 65 to 74 accounted for only 2.9% of the population, followed by the equivalent figures for people between 75-84 and over 85 with merely 1% and 0.2% respectively. Subsequently, all age groups’ proportions grew steadily until 1940, when the figures for population aged 65-74 and 75-84 increased significantly to 4.8% and 1.7% respectively. In contrast, there were no significant changes in the figure for people who were older than 85
From 1940 upwards, the portion of elders began to rise considerably and reached its peak at 12.6% in 1990 including 7.3%, 4.0% and 1.2% of people between 65-74, 75-84 and over 85 years old respectively. After that, the percentage of elderly people was witnessed with a 0.2% decrease, however, although all age groups were reported with remarkable declines of 4% to 8%, the figure for those who were above 85 marginally climbed from 1.2% to 1.5%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 85 marginally climbed from 1.2% to 1.5%
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9203539823 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78190172552 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0976189988 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.333333333 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150380931384 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970233314962 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400277193939 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107406676956 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333014643362 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.