The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant
The Bar chart below provides the information about the results of a survey done in five cities of Australia to find out the percentage of
the people who have their habits of buying and drinking coffee and tea.
Overall, the record of last four weeks represents the percentage of city residents going to a cafe for coffee or to have tea comprises the largest segment as a whole in all of the five cities whereas people buying fresh coffee respondents the least percentage among three categories. However,
the percentage of people buying instant coffee has surpassed the percentage that went to a cafe in the case of Brisbane city with a small margin.
Firstly, the count of the percentage of people going to the cafe which is considered to be the most preferred choice of people as per data shows in between 60% to 65% for three cities, Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, and then descending percentage of around 55 in Brisbane and the least of around 47% in Adelaide.
Secondly, the count of the percentage of people having instant coffee shows around in between 50% to 55% for Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart and the slightly less use around 45 to 50
percentage in Sydney and Melbourne.
At last, the percentage of people having fresh coffee in drink shows 40 to 45 percent of people using it in case of Melbourne and Sydney and at the same time
the people living in Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart seem to drink a little less as compared to the other two cities.
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 67
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 67
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 56
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... and Hobart seem to drink a little less as compared to the other two cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7519379845 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52564516125 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480620155039 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9803422664 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 204.333333333 112.824112599 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 22.9334400587 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237259091917 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148321714047 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119222909088 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119412919854 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874401398778 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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