The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australians cities Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australians cities

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart demonstrates the percentage of people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Overall, it’s clear that the habits in buying tea, coffee or drinking are differences among 5 cities : Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Hobart, Adelaide.

First of all, the percentage of residents in cities who went to a cafe in the last 4 weeks are all higher than 45%. Melbourne with approximately 65% finishes the first, followed by Sydney and Hobert with both a little over 60%, and Adelaide has the smallest percentage, about 50%. There is a trend that in all 5 cities, the number of people having instant coffee as their choices are all higher than the choice of the fresh one . None of the cities above have more than 55% residents choosing instant coffee, about 50% and 55% residents of Hobart and Adelaide prefer this kind of coffee to other ones, 3 other cities all have less equal or less than 50% people choosing. With fresh coffee, all residents in 5 cities seem not to be interested in fresh coffee, with Sydney finishes the first with nearly 45% people that be keen on fresh coffee in the last 4 week.

In conclusion, we can firmly believe that variety of changes are reported in the survey, it’s shown that each city would have their habit in shopping, specifically in buying tea and coffee

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, in conclusion, kind of, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47332679242 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0352404886 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216298213244 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11967829581 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111220069361 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201192808534 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107613038598 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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