The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram above showed us the results of people’s habits about buying coffee and tea four weeks period in five Australian cities.
It is different style drink food or habits of people in the cities in Australia.
In general the people have a habit went to a café for a coffee or tea in Sidney, Melbourne and Hobart are higher than in Brisbane and Adelaide. There are more than sixty percent of people in those cities went to café shop while in the Brisbane and Adlaide only had around 50%. The habits of people in each city also differently. The people in Sydney and Melbourne are likely bought fresh coffee than people in other cities in Australia. It is about 40 plus percent people bought fresh coffee in Sydney and Melbourne, other city is only more than 30 percent.
About 40 percent people in all those cities went to a café to bought instant coffee; it is a little bit higher in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
In conclusion, the people in five cities in Australia really want to come c coffee in their life. But each city there is a different style drink habit in each city
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
...and Adelaide. There are more than sixty percent of people in those cities went to café ...
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Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... café to bought instant coffee; it is a little bit higher in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...different style drink habit in each city
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55837563452 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.279057801 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456852791878 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7182912528 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282203481355 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139337596555 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704252416221 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186449747078 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079967702571 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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