The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the percentage of Australian people habit of drinking and buying coffee of five different cities.
Overall, visiting to a café for coffee or tea is in highest position in all five cities except Adelaide, where, buying fresh coffee is ranked last. In all five cities, trends of people habit are shown similar except Adelaide.
In details, people in Melbourne almost 63% visit café for drinking habit, while, Hobart and Sydney are in second and third position with over 60%, although, in Adelaide below 50% of people visit café which is less than buying instant coffee.
People interest in buying instant coffee is in second position except Adelaide. Hobart city is leading with approximately 54%, while, in Brisbane nearly 52% people are interest in buying and similarly, with just 50% Adelaide is in third ranked in all cities but ranked first in same city among 3 choices.
Furthermore, buying fresh coffee is the least choice of all three cities, while, around 43% of Sydney’s people choose to buy fresh coffee, although, Melbourne and Hobart is at second and third rank with over 40% and below 40%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the highest'.
Suggestion: in the highest
...visiting to a café for coffee or tea is in highest position in all five cities except Adel...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...hile, in Brisbane nearly 52% people are interest in buying and similarly, with just 50% ...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...same city among 3 choices. Furthermore, buying fresh coffee is the least choice ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, similarly, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03723404255 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35985048172 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5698957518 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242586568906 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144534150091 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741435433864 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167024007454 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799736878426 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.