The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The paragraph illustrates the proportion of the habits of buying and drinking coffee and tea in five Australian cities: sydney, melbourne, brisbane, adelaide, and hobart.
In the past four weeks, five countries have shown a consistent preference for purchasing instant coffee or visiting cafés for coffee and tea. In melbourne, the highest percentage of residents prefer to go to a café, while in adelaide, people tend to prefer buying instant coffee. The proportion of people who prefer to buy instant coffee in hobart is higher compared to other cities. buying fresh coffee has the lowest rate but is still popular in sydney.
Regarding the chart, both sydney and melbourne have a high percentage of people who prefer purchasing fresh coffee, with sydney at approximately 44% and melbourne exceeding 40%. The rest make up only a small percentage, with brisbane and adelaide both being less than 35%.
In the past four weeks, there has been a preference for instant coffee instead of fresh coffee. The rate of preference for instant coffee has been over 45% in all cities. In three cities, namely brisbane, adelaide, and hobart, the preference for instant coffee has exceeded 50%. The highest rate, approximately 55%, was recorded in hobart.
compared to others, going to a café is the most popular in all 5 cities. only adelaide has a percentage of it smaller than the rate of instant coffee, especially less than 50%. other cities have a proportion of café more than 55%, with the peak in melbourne at 64%.
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 67
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64423911625 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460317460317 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3287764999 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127104738534 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516554167501 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049892604336 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888029340206 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634857847571 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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