The given chart present the statistics on people's coffee and tea buying and drinkin habits in five cities of Australia.
Overall, in all of given 5 cities - Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart - all criteria sreveal variable results.
As it is clear from the chart, Sydney and Melbourne showed similar indicators. The amount of people, who have bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks was 44%, while in Melbourne it was around 42%. The number of people, who have bought instant coffee for the same period of time was 45% in Sydney and 48% in Melbourne. Indicator of people, who went to cafe for coffee or tea made up 60 and 64% accordingly in the given cities.
In Brisbane and Adelaide the indicators of the first case decreased down to 34%, while the results of the second case have increased up to 53 and 50% relatively. The amount of people who went to a cafe was different for both cities: in first one it was 64%, in the second one- 55%.
The difference between the indicators of people in Hobart buying fresh coffee, people buying instant coffee and people going to cafe is coniderable- 38, 54 and 63% respectively, the last one of which is one of the highest results among given cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...have bought instant coffee for the same period of time was 45% in Sydney and 48% in Melbourne....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70892018779 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48748082278 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516431924883 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.900859348 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.444444444 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157801098313 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755729718098 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843855980871 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110276327555 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09902154056 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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