The given graph displays diverse sources of air pollutants in the UK between 1990 and 2005.
In general, statistics are measured in million tons and have four items- total, industry, household and transport. Almost all indicators showed considerable decline in figures.
As it can be seen from the graph, total air pollution has the highest indicators: there was a sharp decrease from 7 million to 4 million tonnes between 1990-1999. After that, by 2005 there was observed a slight decline from 4 to 3.2 million tonnes. Similarly, industry hit the point of 5.5 million in 1990. In the interval of 1993-1996 there was a sharp drop from 5 million down to 3 million. Numbers stayed almost stable during 1996-2005, at the lattest falling down to the point of 2 million.
The most constant statistics were revealed by household air pollution. During all the given period of time it had insignificant fluctuations, but still not going over the mark of 1 million. Transport air pollution demonstrated the similar results with similar fluctuations, reaching its bottom at the point of 0.3 million in 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... In general, statistics are measured in million tons and have four items- total, indust...
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Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...old air pollution. During all the given period of time it had insignificant fluctuations, but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, still, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08241758242 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82546363933 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620879120879 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2507851141 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0909090909 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172888921765 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747666079955 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847495516919 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131398198891 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107365177628 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.