the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.
The bar chart gives information about outputs of a questionnaire which illustrate Australia people’s consuming tendency of coffee and tea in 5 different cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall, it is clear that in the most given cities, except Adelaide, cafe is the most popular way for people to drink and buy coffee and tea, by contrast, through whole five cities, the least people bought fresh coffee in last 1 month.
In Melbourne, cafe had the highest proportion of residents’ preference for having coffee and tea at around 64%, followed by Hobart, Sydney, Brisbane, and Adelaide at approximately 63%, 61%, just over 55%, and slightly less than 50% respectively. In addition, there is nearly13% difference between Melbourne and Adelaide.
Followed the other category which ranked 3rd, ‘people bought fresh coffee in last 1 month’, it saw the least preference ratio through whole ways in all cities. It recorded highest in Sydney by around 44% , while recorded the lowest in Brisbane by around 35%.
Meanwhile, ‘bought instant coffee in last 4 weeks’ category, the second popular way to have coffee or tea reached at peak with around 53% in Brisbane unlike the figure of Sydney is just around 45%.
In addition, in those five major cities, it seems cafe is more in fashion to enjoy coffee and tea for residents. Almost more than 20% of people chose cafe rather than bought fresh coffee by themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15246636771 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67758505531 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569506726457 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9845660402 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182541801447 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078118151801 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685682679389 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102253608284 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688687757982 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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