Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is true that there are some efficient methods to protect environment from the governments and huge companies. for instance, governments can make a law to make environment better, such as fine for people who did not distinguish the refusal or throw away garbage anywhere that can destroy the environment. or through the companies, they can encourager there employees to volunteer like pick up the garbage from the ground or plant trees in specific area. it is more easy to do in group than by oneself individually.
while there are positive aspects make an effort in group through government or companies, there are still a lot of things that people can do individually by themselves as well. based on my personal experience, using my own tumbler in cafe instead of plastic or paper cups can reduce the pollution of the environment, and the earth. I did it everyday in my single days after I realize that. another small effort can be don't leave your meal. everyday people leave their food a lot through whole world. it led severe pollution because it take long time to go back to ground. so I want to suggest that from the first time, make your meal's amount for proper , so you can it all at once.
there are various things that people can do for making the environment better through governments and large companies but there is also uncountable ways the efforts can make from each individual persons as well. so I would like to argue that we need to make an effort in both ways, not make it from only one-side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67910447761 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60188526653 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8424174528 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303685782023 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980009435827 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965509335054 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226743242635 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589219836714 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.