The pie chart illustrates the distribution of visitors to distinct types of tourist attractions in Britain in 1999 and the percentage of visits to different attractions in theme park. Overall, it is apparent that theme parks and museums with galleries were the most visited places. Moreover, almost a half of all individuals went to the blacpool pleasure beach.
According to the pie chart theme parks and museums with galleries were responsible for almost the same percentage of all visiting at around 38%. In contrast, wildlife parks and zoos were as much as four times lower than the formers. Historic houses and monuments were at over 15%, however significantly lower than the theme parks, museums and galleries.
In details, blackpool pleasure beach was the most adored tourist's place, near a half of them went there. Followed by alton towers and pleasureland that shared the similar percentage at around 17%. Interesting to note that only 10% of all visitors went to the legoland in Windsor and Chessington world of adventures, that made these attractions the least popular among people.
- The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999 78
- Many people believe that teachers should take the responsibility for the students to judge what is right and wrong and behave well while others feel that teacher should only take academic subjects Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby Therefore smoking should be banned in public places To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re beach. According to the pie chart theme parks and museums with galleries w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20903954802 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75583468092 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1184290855 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145008212801 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589641193033 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939483305981 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103109504599 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798988479379 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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