The chart below shows the sales revenue in dollars at three branches of a bank in the first quarter of 2010.
The chart represents the amount of income made by a bank that is located in three places (Newhaven, Brighton and Seaford) in the first quarter of 2010.
Overall, the amount of profit had witnessed the periodic fluctuation. Among the fluctuation, Newhaven and Brighton showed an increasing trend with its profits, whereas Seaford branch's profit declined over a period given.
Looking in details for Newhaven and Brighton located branches had made an increasing trend in its profits within three months. In January, Newhaven and Brighton had profited of about $25,000 and around $22,000 respectively, before it declined to $20,000 for Newhaven and approximately $16,000 or Brighton in February. By March, both branches increased with its profits to record at $35,000 for Brighton and the highest profit was made by Newhaven branch of $40,000 in the same month.
In contrast, the amount of sales revenue made by Seaford branch was the lowest in January and March. In January, Seaford branch had the sales revenue of below $15,000 and by March it recorded at about $12,000 profits. However, Seaford branch had the highest sales revenue in February of around $27,000.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'look', 'whereas', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.300970873786 0.268076937826 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.131067961165 0.116061578633 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0291262135922 0.0759168565197 38% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0291262135922 0.0366838410393 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0242718446602 0.0131127313244 185% => OK
Prepositions: 0.184466019417 0.155750635184 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0533980582524 0.0379272487307 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53137254274 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00970873786408 0.0210936926555 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0825242718447 0.0948980150116 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00485436893204 0.00967000014798 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1143.0 1161.00487805 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.9 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11229946524 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.44385026738 0.337110787985 132% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310160427807 0.247514529752 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197860962567 0.171178102325 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0641711229947 0.112407865282 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53137254274 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48128342246 0.546246751206 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.9775594036 49.3433353143 81% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7777777778 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7801931552 42.9750493124 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 135.714022679 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.689975730869 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.7938205585 47.7609492067 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.92105263158 2.94281807926 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442540049765 0.418131533498 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.318298940283 0.181151798455 176% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0994865071993 0.0850326197045 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.761022769425 0.706616315825 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116497892154 0.157042692854 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.258083294732 0.228904883108 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142805410013 0.108899403657 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.320557082422 0.367819155151 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0804435503233 0.0812612215331 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336493474991 0.316326947829 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146995698452 0.0921553760075 160% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.