Given is a table providing information about round-the-clock hours of sleeping in people involving in 5 different occupational categories in accordance with a Canadian research.
In general terms, the data suggest that people in all jobs except truck drivers are asleep from 11-12 pm to 6-7 am. Also the students have the most hours of sleeping about 8 hours among all occupations.
As regards details in the table, the students and the business executives have stable non-stop patterns of sleep which begins at 11-12 pm and lasts until 4-5 am in business executives and 6-7 am in students.
Conversely, as for full time mothers, doctors and truck driver, it can explicitly be seen that they have irregular sleep patterns. Doctors sleep the least hours at night about 5 hours with on hour of being awake in the middle. Truck drivers have the most unstable hours of sleep which consists of 3 hours in the morning and 3 hours in the evening.
To sum up, some types of occupations can adversely affect the pattern of sleeping in people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'Canadian research'.
Suggestion: Canadian research
...upational categories in accordance with a Canadian research. In general terms, the data suggest ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ers are asleep from 11-12 pm to 6-7 am. Also the students have the most hours of sle...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess executives and 6-7 am in students. Conversely, as for full time mothers, do...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... am in students. Conversely, as for full time mothers, doctors and truck driver, it c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fect the pattern of sleeping in people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, so, as for, as regards, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93220338983 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70406127833 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3539031569 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1233594175 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061313910492 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542010791945 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817823733384 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572545404513 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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