The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. Th table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.
The given vertical bar graph represents the earning amount from exports of different products for the year 2015 and 2016 and the given table depicts how percentage of exports changed from 2015 to 2016.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that petroleum products industry had the maximum earnings on export business, while the minimum earning was in the textiles industry.
In the year 2015 petroleum products had the maximum earning around $60 billion, which then increased to around $63 billion in 2016. Earning on engineering goods had also increased from almost $65 billion in 2015 to$61 billion in 2016 approximately. There was decrease in the earning in gems and jewellery industry. It decreased from around $43 billion in 2015 to around $40 billion in 2016. In agricultural products earning remained same for both the year at $30 billion. At last, Textile industry had the minimum earning on export. It increased to $30 billion in 2016.
For the petroleum products, earning on export was increased by 3% compared to 2015 earnings. There was increase in earnings for the engineering goods by 8.5%. Agricultural products had the minimum growth in earning as it was increased by 0.81% only. On the other hand textiles industry had the maximum change by 15.24%. For gems and jewellery industry there was decline in business as it faced negative change at 5.18%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'textiles'' or 'textile's'?
Suggestion: textiles'; textile's
...s, while the minimum earning was in the textiles industry. In the year 2015 petroleum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01769911504 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65206341617 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411504424779 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3933127548 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150750490913 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665852245376 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698298086911 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117040613686 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843746364964 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.