The pie chart indicates the type of work that a university student of Anthropology did after receiving a diploma. Besides, the salaries of the aforementioned science graduates after half of the decade are also mentioned in the table.
Generally, after finishing their undergraduate qualification curriculum, the students tend to get a nine-to-five job, following that is a part-time position, unemployment, postgraduate study, or nameless, and finally part-time work together with graduate study. Furthermore, the income of each student after years of striving hard for the career.
After graduating, most of the students are employed in nine-to-five positions with a ratio of 52%, compared to 15% for the irregular job, and 12% unemployed. The option full-time postgrad study, categorized as unknown, as well as part-time work and postgrad study, seem not to be interested when their percentages are lower than 10%, specifically 8% along with 5% in turn.
Turning to the table, the types of employment mentioned also have 2 salaries, namely the low and average is from 25,000$ to 74,999$, as well as the high is from 75,000$ and above. The freelance consultants were employed with the total rate in the high pay scale of 80% ( 40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+), and that in the low scale of 20%. Surprisingly, officers in the government sector also have the same rate with a small difference that they have 10% more employees having a salary greater than or equal to 100,000$. In contrast to them, workers of private companies only have 55% of the total rate in the high pay scale while the low and average income is 25% higher than them.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both view and give your opinion 84
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be a case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 73
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the advantages of being self employed 67
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
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... total rate in the high pay scale of 80% 40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...g a salary greater than or equal to 100,000$. In contrast to them, workers of privat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07913669065 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92709403835 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4796928042 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.2 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163223613655 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075859605148 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743962015813 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128334163373 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972218009112 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpared to 15% for the irregular job, and 12% unemployed. The option full-time pos...
^^
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
..., namely the low and average is from 25,000$ to 74,999$, as well as the high is from...
^^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
Suggestion: $999
...e low and average is from 25,000$ to 74,999$, as well as the high is from 75,000$ an...
^^^^
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...74,999$, as well as the high is from 75,000$ and above. The freelance consultants we...
^^^^
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... total rate in the high pay scale of 80% 40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,...
^^
Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ale of 80% 40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+...
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Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
Suggestion: $999
...40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+, and that i...
^^^^
Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+, and that in the low scale of 20%. Sur...
^^^^
Line 7, column 554, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...g a salary greater than or equal to 100,000$. In contrast to them, workers of privat...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07913669065 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92709403835 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4796928042 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.2 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163223613655 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075859605148 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743962015813 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128334163373 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972218009112 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.