In society today, there are some points of view supposed that the sales of brands are reaching the top due to the excessive success in advertising, whereas a group of individuals believes the ideas of the commercials are more and more indifferent, leading to losing consideration of people. From my perspective, the first opinion seems to be more appropriate in the current context because of various reasons.
On the one hand, it could be argued that adverts tend to be powerless. Firstly, countless supporters of this view have negative thinkings towards advertising since they are bombarded by it every single day, such as the billboards on the streets or pop-up ads on any website they access. This leads to forming an unconscious habit in them to avoid or ignore the ads if it is possible. Besides, since rampant advertising was invented, individuals have seemed not to believe in fascinating functions which are mentioned in each commercial. They also have thought that the advertisers often polish sales messages, praising their products to attract and increase sales. Consequently, various people have bad impressions of advertising and they only purchase the product after examining it cautiously.
In contrast, I mentioned that I side with those who believe advertisements are still effective. First of all, repetition - the fundamental element for ads memorability is maximized. I supposed that anything that can be promoted heavily seems to get purchase the most. For instance, numerous residents were convinced and buy the product after watching a constantly repeated ad about a particular commodity. This is a spotlight in the eyes of enterprises that makes them spend a significant amount of money in order to increase the frequency on the screen for their products and improve their brand awareness as much as possible. In addition to this, emotional appeal is another potential factor that needs to be fully exploited. With the intention of actualizing this, the marketing team of every industry strives to be creative, unique, and memorable ads to make your product stand out from countless others, capture the feelings and thoughts of the consumers.
In conclusion, consumers always are more disadvantageous towards advertising, and the enterprises still manage to find potential buyers thanks to the massive data they have. Therefore, I believe the influence of advertising is greater than ever and it will continue to grow even more shortly thanks to the creativity of the content creators.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 26, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.295 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99481831842 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2583251007 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.588235294 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5294117647 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989815960674 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292661055896 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310659910252 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054953016814 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296819351533 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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