The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.
The given charts provide information on how families in Great Britain share the amount of housework between males and females.
A glance at the charts reveals that in most household duties, women are responsible for larger amount of work than men, except for gardening, pet care and maintenance odd jobs. Females spend most of their time cooking, baking and washing up, while gardening and petcare makes the most of males’ time.
As presented in the charts, women spend 74 minutes cooking, baking and washing up everyday, while it only takes men 30 minutes. The second largest amount of work of females is cleaning and house tidying, which takes them nearly an hour per day, whereas males spend only 13 minutes on this task. In the children caring and playing sector, the amount of time women spend overtakes that of men with 45 minutes and 20 minutes respectively. While clothes, washing, ironing and sewing takes females 25 minutes on a daily basis, the amount of time males spend on this task is only 2 minutes.
A different picture can be seen in the gardening and petcare sector, where the amount of duty of men overtakes that of women, with 49.5 minutes and 21 minutes respectively. Similarly, males spend 25 minutes on maintenance odd jobs while females spend under 10 minutes on this duty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Britain) must be used with a third-person verb: 'shares'.
Suggestion: shares
...mation on how families in Great Britain share the amount of housework between males a...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the males') or simply say ''most males''.
Suggestion: most of the males; most males
..., while gardening and petcare makes the most of males’ time. As presented in the charts, ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...petcare makes the most of males’ time. As presented in the charts, women spend ...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... minutes cooking, baking and washing up everyday, while it only takes men 30 minutes. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, similarly, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90540540541 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42126649718 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536036036036 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.575524822 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0713822303255 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363566032784 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534929592964 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635772415489 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634476756737 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.