the chart shows how frequently people in USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013
the given bar chart describes the frequency of eating societies in fast food restaurant in three different years.
overall, it illustrates that the highest percentage of citizens who went to the fas food restaurant had been obtained by those who were eating for once a week and for once or twice a month. however, the lowest one is placed by them whom always visit the restaurant everyday .
according to data, about just under 35% of populations was the highest percentage eating in fast food restaurant in 2006 but this rate was replaced by whom ate for once or twice a month in 2013. on the other hand,consuming it for everyday became unpopular because only just under 5% of society who interested in eating it in 2003. furthermore, it kept being decreasing in 2006 until 2013, it had similar trend with those who never went in, yet in 2013 it had the higher community. in addition, from 2006 to 2013, about 15% of people still enjoyed it for a few times a years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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the given bar chart describes the frequency...
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...d restaurant in three different years. overall, it illustrates that the highest percen...
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...e a week and for once or twice a month. however, the lowest one is placed by them whom ...
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Suggestion: every day
...y them whom always visit the restaurant everyday . according to data, about just under ...
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Suggestion: .
...hom always visit the restaurant everyday . according to data, about just under 35...
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...always visit the restaurant everyday . according to data, about just under 35% of popula...
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... ate for once or twice a month in 2013. on the other hand,consuming it for everyda...
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Suggestion: , consuming
...twice a month in 2013. on the other hand,consuming it for everyday became unpopular becaus...
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...013. on the other hand,consuming it for everyday became unpopular because only just unde...
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...ty who interested in eating it in 2003. furthermore, it kept being decreasing in 2006 until...
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Suggestion: In
...et in 2013 it had the higher community. in addition, from 2006 to 2013, about 15% ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
...people still enjoyed it for a few times a years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59634751429 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2081319829 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192521954529 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884298176552 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533299103846 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138241525138 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493190312678 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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