The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart demonstrates how often the USA habitants have the meal at fast food restaurants during the decade from 2003 to 2013. Overall, it is cleared that most residents ate junk food once per week or once to twice per month. And the patterns are similar among 2003, 2006 and 2013.

In 2003, about one fourth of the population ate fast food once per week; the proportion was roughly equal to the figure of the people who ate junk food once or twice per month. After 10 year, the later reached 33%, the highest figure in 2013, followed by the former which accounted for nearly 27%.

The percentage of people who ate fast food several times weekly reached 20% in 2006; however, the figures in other years were only 15%, which were closed to the figures of the individuals who ate fast food a few times a year during the investigations in the three years. It is also interesting to note that both percentages of residents who answered that they go to fast food restaurants every day and of those who had never been there were both less than 5% during the period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53608247423 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28438348517 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8018697038 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215568429941 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107052265686 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688326764318 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158672356122 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478840530921 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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