The given bar graph illustrates the proportion of USA natives who often ate oily food during a decade , from 2003 to 2013.
Overall, Americans ingested fast food moderately. The frequency of consuming junk food was lower in 2013 with the exception of once a month category than 2003 and 2006.
More specifically, from 2003 to 2006, the percentage of people who consumed junk food for one time in a week were 31% , 33% respectively and this was best figure than others.Around 4 % of USA citizens ingested unhealthy food on daily basis . On to those people who ate oily food for many times in 7 days , they were 16 percent in 2003 then this proportion escalated slightly and reached at one-fifth in 2006.Once a twice in month accounted 20 percent of eaters of fast food in 2003 then after next three years, this figure slipped back to a quarter.
Moving ahead, in 2013, the ratio of Americans who prefered fast food many times in a week and few times a year was similar which was 15 percent.The most of people liked to eat junk food once a month which was nearly one-third. Approximately 4 percent of indigenous never prefered to eat oily food in Usa.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the proportion of USA natives who often ate oily food during a decade , from 200...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...who often ate oily food during a decade , from 2003 to 2013. Overall, American...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...f consuming junk food was lower in 2013 with the exception of once a month category than 2003 and 200...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... More specifically, from 2003 to 2006, the percentage of people who consumed ju...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...unk food for one time in a week were 31% , 33% respectively and this was best figu...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Around
...ly and this was best figure than others.Around 4 % of USA citizens ingested unhealthy ...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s ingested unhealthy food on daily basis . On to those people who ate oily food fo...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o ate oily food for many times in 7 days , they were 16 percent in 2003 then this ...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Once
...ightly and reached at one-fifth in 2006.Once a twice in month accounted 20 percent ...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('twice') instead an adjective, or a noun ('in') instead of another adjective.
...y and reached at one-fifth in 2006.Once a twice in month accounted 20 percent of eaters o...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... one-fifth in 2006.Once a twice in month accounted 20 percent of eaters of fast f...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...a year was similar which was 15 percent.The most of people liked to eat junk food o...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ar was similar which was 15 percent.The most of people liked to eat junk food once a month whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6195986541 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.8429019365 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256773278026 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138052043809 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311064293173 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176147942769 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230494809394 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the proportion of USA natives who often ate oily food during a decade , from 200...
^^
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...who often ate oily food during a decade , from 2003 to 2013. Overall, American...
^^
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...f consuming junk food was lower in 2013 with the exception of once a month category than 2003 and 200...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... More specifically, from 2003 to 2006, the percentage of people who consumed ju...
^^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...unk food for one time in a week were 31% , 33% respectively and this was best figu...
^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Around
...ly and this was best figure than others.Around 4 % of USA citizens ingested unhealthy ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s ingested unhealthy food on daily basis . On to those people who ate oily food fo...
^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o ate oily food for many times in 7 days , they were 16 percent in 2003 then this ...
^^
Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Once
...ightly and reached at one-fifth in 2006.Once a twice in month accounted 20 percent ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('twice') instead an adjective, or a noun ('in') instead of another adjective.
...y and reached at one-fifth in 2006.Once a twice in month accounted 20 percent of eaters o...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... one-fifth in 2006.Once a twice in month accounted 20 percent of eaters of fast f...
^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...a year was similar which was 15 percent.The most of people liked to eat junk food o...
^^^
Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ar was similar which was 15 percent.The most of people liked to eat junk food once a month whi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6195986541 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.8429019365 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256773278026 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138052043809 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311064293173 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176147942769 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230494809394 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.