The home is basic need of all human beings. A residence provides shelter to people and also it's a place to rest. Arguably, the money which is spent by an individual on their home, whether renting or buying is one of the highest expenses incurred during a life time. Renting a home is lower risk and provides flexibilty while giving less personal control and monetary gain, however owing a house can be risker and also it can provide more control and profit.
Renting a home os lower risk for tenants and also gives the abilitu to relocate for workplace and school. In other words, the tenants can move around to new location at their ease by giving one month notice to the owner and can move to the location as per their choice which is near to their workplace .To exemplify it, millions of students around the world pay between 300 to 500 dollars for monthly rent and once their semester is over they move back to their hometown so this is clear benefit of leasing . However , tenants can not make significant changes in their home without the premission of landlords and also students renting their apartments cannot suddenly decide to rebuild their bathorooms ,nor they ever get back the 500 dollars paid to the landlords therefore this is the negatives of leasing .
The leading benfit of buying a house is that, it provides an opporunity to get profits.clearly, the rates of home prices goes ups according to the time so there would be a substantial return on investment.For instance , if a person stays for long time in his home then the price of house may increase and a person can indirectly get profits in this way .However, in a bid of luxurious life style , the buyers can be under the debt as they will have to pay tax to state and although the mortgage payments are generally fixed , they are usually higher than the rented house so it may risker to buy a house.
In conclusion, although renting house has flexibility for tenats , owning home is far better than it , as the buyers can get monetary gain and also save their money for future.I believe that buying a personal home is more preferable than the rented one's.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65343915344 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47076519778 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.774869085 49.4020404114 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.444444444 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172076942355 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805373494193 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602307646839 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129836812327 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547036624103 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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