Given is the percentage of men and women passing their driving test in one Asian country between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, more women than men passed their driving test throughout the whole study period. It is of note that in 1980, fewest men and women passed the driving test, while in 2000, most people passed the examination.
Regarding the first half of the investigation period, in 1980, the proportion of women passing the test accounted for just under 50%, which surpassed the quantity of men by around 20%. Notably, in 1990, the number of women who passed the driving test, increased by approximately 3%, while the figure for men rose from slightly below 30% to almost 40%.
In terms of the second part of the research period, in 2000, the indicator for women soared by about 15% reaching nearly 70% in comparison to the number for men, which climbed by around 10% to roughly 50%. In 2010, the rate for women dropped insignificantly from about 69% to approximately 64%, whereas the percentage of men plateaued at just below 50%.
- Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animals all over the world Some people think that it is too late to do something about it Others think that there is still time to take effective action Discuss both view and give your own opinion 73
- The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015 73
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- The chart below show household spending patterns in two countries between 1980 and 2008 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the fewest'.
Suggestion: , the fewest
...study period. It is of note that in 1980, fewest men and women passed the driving test, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83798882682 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51876636754 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3251396153 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311197413363 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185886409499 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137859116858 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253552655993 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153799910524 0.0819641961636 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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