The chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003 all figure in percentage
The given representation reveals the information about sports games played by player that was differentiate in two categories during the period 2003 the data is Calibrated in per centum It is clear,and cover representation.
Overall,it is evident that maximum amount in swimming games of girls category,and soccer game to boys beside, minimum ratio of these two categories into athletic.
Adding from details, that the nine games was presence in Australia.as well as all this category differ from each other.firstly, one to three categories was been data of boy,and girl 25,27,20 means to say above from twenty.nextly,In another three categories tennis,basketball,martial arts were lowest amount from everyone. These categories have data 8,10,6,5,7Respectivly.
On other side, that other three categories were been difference between each other as well as, In three categories like atheists, cricket, and other that have been account 4,6,2,10,20,12 Respectively finally, that these three categories data amount below from twenty,and above from two.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differentiated'.
Suggestion: differentiated
... sports games played by player that was differentiate in two categories during the period 200...
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Suggestion: , and
... is Calibrated in per centum It is clear,and cover representation. Overall,it i...
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Suggestion: , it
...r,and cover representation. Overall,it is evident that maximum amount in swimm...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ount in swimming games of girls category,and soccer game to boys beside, minimum rat...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from details, that the nine games was presence in Australia.as well as all thi...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
... other.firstly, one to three categories was been data of boy,and girl 25,27,20 means to ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...to three categories was been data of boy,and girl 25,27,20 means to say above from t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...20 means to say above from twenty.nextly,In another three categories tennis,basketb...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , basketball
...extly,In another three categories tennis,basketball,martial arts were lowest amount from ev...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the lowest'.
Suggestion: were the lowest
...tegories tennis,basketball,martial arts were lowest amount from everyone. These categories ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, that other three categories were been difference between each other as well a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e been difference between each other as well as, In three categories like atheis...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...categories data amount below from twenty,and above from two.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8961038961 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64972036765 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9688609812 43.030603864 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.6 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0518048568863 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319549184477 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455441294167 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0389940757589 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476500606555 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.53 11.4140731707 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 11.4329268293 192% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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