The Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Auslralain cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006
The supplied horizontal bar graph depicts the share of the two different developed nations in 2001
To begin with UK,most citizens of England watched US flims (little few than 80%)which was approximately 60% more than their native movies.While Australian and other movies were less preferred by cinema market (10% and near about 5%) .Australian individuals preferred other flims(approximately 60%).UK flims and Australian movies had lowest visitors as campared to other flims(Both less than 5%).
On the other hand,the given linearlayout depicts the visitors who's admissions in cinema to watch movie.
In case of Britain,more than 100 million visited in beginning year and exhibited rise in next few years but after reaching at 120 millions it showed drop in count of visitors in 85(half of beginning year).But after that showed fluctuatation and increase in count of visitors.Before the end of given time it showed again fluctuatation and fall dropped in number of visitors(160 millions approximately).While Australian visitors showed low start as campared to UK visitors.In starting years it showed little grow in visitors(40%) but continously fluctuated till 90(few than 40%).After 90 it showed sharp rise in watchers and reached at double of 1980.Before end of given time exhibited fluctuatation and started increase in count of visitors.
Overall,it can be clearly seen from charts,the managment of cinemas in both nations screened Hollywood moviea as campared to other flims.And large number of citizens visited to cinema to flim and gave big responsr as campared to starting years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49590163934 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14917083399 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581967213115 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 22.4926829268 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 240.01770768 43.030603864 558% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.25 112.824112599 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 22.9334400587 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179689651228 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106361243496 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204843238206 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948480662891 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165379360653 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.2329268293 264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 61.2550243902 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.3012195122 263% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.9970731707 240% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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