Consumers nowadays are faced with increased advertising from competitive companies. To what extend do you think consumers are influenced by these advertisments ? What measures can be taken to tackle this issue ?
Nowadays,myraid well-known companies inrcease deliver advertisment for growing up their productivity because citizens are readily influenced by these advertisments. I personally believe that the role of advertisment is crucial in our life but it should be limited.
There are multitude reasons behind why the individuals are easily influenced by these advertisments. First of all, the access of socail media is too wide as campared to other source. So, competitive companies use socail media for grow up their productivity because almost all buyer are using internet and socail media for personal purpose which is the reasons companies deliver their crucial adds on social sites because when we open any website firstly we see a add and attimes we are impressed by add and purchase it. Furthermore, the unawareness among the citizens regarting the truth of advertisments is also a cause because sometimes advertiser proform too good and inspire the individauls which force them to buy it without seeing these qaulity and features. As well as especially in youngstars,the follow their role model and try to copy their lifestyle and wearingstyle. Moreover,attimes war between two well-known companies inspire the inhibitants to buy their product because these campanies deliver them better features in discount which influence the common-citizens and provide productivity to companies.
On the other hand, there are few facts to reduce this issue. Firstly, government can give awareness to citizens through the T.V programs and internet as well as individuals can play a crucial role to decrease this hindrance because nowadays common-man has big power, with the help of internet, they can display the truth of fake advertisment. Secondly, advertisments can be limied and totally banned by regime because the level of adds are continously increasing without any check which is harmful for both economic and financially growth.For example: the autherity of argentina banned advertisments in their nations because it presum that the advertisments can kill their economic growth and bolck the mind of individuals. Eventaully, schooling regarding truth of advertisments should be started because it can act as a power weapon to reduce this issue . Good example from japan, the autherity of japan providing cooking study to students because the give the value to all important field.
In conclusion, although, it is a serious hindrance but it can be solved by autherities efforts but also individuals can deliver aid to it. So, government ought to take step to reduce this issue. Individuals should check the truth with the help of olders and social circle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42753623188 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09131928133 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51690821256 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.8978262016 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.4375 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174470045384 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607132888279 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443871378163 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114132308789 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440434354705 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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