The charts below give information about the amount and types of water in the world, and also tell the use of water in three areas in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate how much water is being contained and the sort of water all the world, and the graph depicts the water is used in different categories, namely household use, industry, agriculture in three nations: Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada
Overall, freshwater accounts for at least that shown on the precious commodity within the total of water worldwide, in which, a small fraction of usable water are being in domestic use, industry and agriculture.
Beginning with the first pie chart, it is obvious that saline water is the major chunk of total world water and remained at 2.50% of the rest in freshwater. In terms of the second pie chart, frozen water is made up of over two-third in the form of glaciers and permanent snows. The second-ranked is fresh underground water which constitutes 29.90%, in comparison with fresh renewable water and underground have a little fraction of 0.30% and 0.90%.
Lastly, the bar charts are that indicates Saudi Arabia used much water in agriculture, with it reached the highest point at 50%, whereas Egypt is lower than 10% in using for cultivation and Canada has just at 30% in this category. However, Canada witnessed a significant figure at 45% rather than Saudi Arabia, it has less than 20% and only 8% in Egypt in using water for industry. In addition, the water uses for domestic purposes with Canada’s figure nearly 20%. While Saudi Arabia has just below 10%, Egypt is used its water at 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...domestic use, industry and agriculture. Beginning with the first pie chart, it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, second, so, third, whereas, while, at least, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55688405826 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.980334696 43.030603864 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.5 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 5.23603664747 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214293296883 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105140556237 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442176563219 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145175261976 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450483987921 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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