The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.

The bar chart presents some information on the popularity of entertainment establishments among people in 2009. Besides, admission prices are available in the table for 7 types of events and for a single ticket and for a family one.

As an overall trend, it might be seen that people tend to choose more frequently the cheapest option, such as cinemas, to be entertained. Aside from this, people retell visit sports games while the fare of it varies greatly.

According to the table, the family ticket price in cinemas is 55 dollars while the attendance figure on the bar chart is the highest (over 1000 thousand) in 2009. The position of Theme Park is in the middle reaching the highest point of about 350 thousand with a family ticket price of 210 dollars.

Interestingly, Sports is a relatively unpopular event which attracted approximately 150 thousand visitors only. The average price of a football game in 2009 is 73 dollars per person with a tiny reduction for four-people families. Nevertheless, Baseball Game and Cricket Game are remarkably cheaper: 34 dollars and 24 dollars per person respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, nevertheless, so, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05434782609 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89207553462 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.4752137502 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138532937338 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566531628992 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618630741982 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809896684808 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656226500116 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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