The charts below give the information about the interests of people living in the UK in 2016

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The charts below give the information about the interests of people living in the UK in 2016.

The bar chart demonstrates key data on the hobbies of Bristish population according to different age groups in the year 2016, whilst the pie charts compare their level of interests by gender.
Overall, it is clear in a glance that gardening was regarded as the major hobby for the 75 or over age group, while most of the young opted for travelling. Furthermore, there are quite similar patterns regarding the proportion of activities of males and females.
In detail, as regards the first graph, it can be clearly seen that those aged 24 to 35 were reported to be keen on travelling the most, standing at 76%, more than tripling the figure for the oldest group. The 16-24 and 35-50 age groups, meanwhile, witnessed the same trend, with 71%, whereas half of those aged between 50 and 75 prefered travelling. On the contrary, people aged 75 or over were most interested in gardening activities (72%), significantly outstripping the figure for the 50-75 group (30%) and the total percentage of three younger categories (just 27%). The statistics for studying were relatively similar (except for the 75+ group), registering between 15% and 20%.
Turning to the other charts, travelling was considered to be the least favored option for both genders, with 29% for women and 32% for men. At the same time, males and females had the same passion for learning, accounting for roughly a third each. Finally, 38% of women responded to love gardening, compared to a slightly lower figure for men at 35%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, regarding, third, whereas, while, as regards, except for, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88932806324 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64565978408 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6024629795 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.7 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0490909722485 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216155149627 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473490872069 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445663834039 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625804276523 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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