The Charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for the UK residents to visit.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show about visited-UK frequencies by foreign citizens between 1979 and 1999, and the five most favourite places to visit by UK residents in 1999.The units of going to and from are measured from 0 to 60 million. Five popular countries to travel are divided into five regions, Turkey, Greece, USA, Spain, France.
Overall, the native-UK tourists remained bigger in number than foreign tourists. The proportion of native-UK travelers increased significantly in every five years. The big development was not happening prior to 1984. Post-1984 increasing 5 million, the number rose 10 million in every five years ahead of. The result was over 50 million UK residents went abroad in the late of 1999, whereas, foreign tourists to the UK stayed at under 30 millions travellers in the same year.
In addition, near and over 10 millions of 50 million UK travellers, in 1999, travelled to Spain and France. Under 5 millions of them went to Turkey, Greece, and the USA. Above all, France and Spain were the most favourite country to go to by UK citizens in the particular of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...places to visit by UK residents in 1999.The units of going to and from are measured...
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: bigger
...verall, the native-UK tourists remained bigger in number than foreign tourists. The proportion o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent abroad in the late of 1999, whereas, foreign tourists to the UK stayed at und...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...same year. In addition, near and over 10 millions of 50 million UK travellers, in 1999, trav...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...9, travelled to Spain and France. Under 5 millions of them went to Turkey, Greece, and the US...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'whereas', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244019138756 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.1004784689 0.116061578633 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.066985645933 0.0759168565197 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287081339713 0.0366838410393 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00478468899522 0.0131127313244 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153110047847 0.155750635184 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0239234449761 0.0379272487307 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64577952648 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0478468899522 0.0210936926555 227% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0765550239234 0.0948980150116 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1085.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.9 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92896174863 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360655737705 0.337110787985 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295081967213 0.247514529752 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207650273224 0.171178102325 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125683060109 0.112407865282 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64577952648 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568306010929 0.546246751206 104% => OK
Word variations: 50.5851250713 49.3433353143 103% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3 23.0094962315 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.908179275 42.9750493124 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 135.714022679 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 23.0094962315 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3 0.689975730869 43% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 47.8081967213 47.7609492067 100% => OK
Elegance: 3.14285714286 2.94281807926 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472219302707 0.418131533498 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144557015531 0.181151798455 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0970457454133 0.0850326197045 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.609008856887 0.706616315825 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148647238986 0.157042692854 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221770792709 0.228904883108 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133334900286 0.108899403657 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.353537536835 0.367819155151 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0351388564236 0.0812612215331 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373730169746 0.316326947829 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680254822277 0.0921553760075 74% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.